I met my goal yesterday, and exceeded it a little–slightly over 2,000 words. I’m taking just a brief moment to introduce you to my characters this morning. I still don’t have a satisfactory name for this sucker so, in deference to Erika, I’m calling it AGGIE AND THE ZOMBIES for now. While AATZ is set in Victorian times, I wasn’t quite so lucky as to find male models in period costume. I was a bit luckier with the ladies.
AggieaggieinbrownAllow me to introduce Lady Agatha Elizabeth Victoria Carmichael, M.D. She much prefers to be called Aggie by her friends. Aggie grew up tagging around the world after her father, Colonel Sir George Carmichael, M.D., late of Her Royal Majesty’s Army. She spent time in India as a girl when he was in service there as a medical officer with his regiment. Now, while Aggie is something of a free spirit, she doesn’t really dance around the woods naked. The first picture is her face. The second is the way she normally appears in polite society.

Polite society, you say? I find nothing polite about a sniveling bunch of boors.

Yes, this would be Aggie.

winnieAggie’s dearest friend is a very sweet and proper young lady by the name of Winnifred Horatia Phipps. Winnie is a Lady with a capitol L as well and quite well connected. She recently made her debut and, much to her delight, intends to make a good marriage with a titled gentleman with quite extensive estates in the country. Sadly, though, he only rents rooms in the city, a situation she hops to rectify once they are married. Needless to say, Winnie is quite smitten with the Marquis of Rivencroft, but more about him in a bit. Winnie is a lovely girl and quite loyal to Aggie, though she’s never understood Aggie’s drive and ambition.

chrisheyerdahlThe man Winnie hopes to marry, at the urging of her parents, is Lord Victor Henry Sutcliffe, the Marquis of Rivencroft. Victor had a distinguished military career that ended abruptly and after some time spent overseeing his various holdings around the Empire, he’s just returned to England and has put out the word he’s looking for a proper English wife. Winnie fits the bill–young, impressionable, rich. Winnie has stars in her eyes when she looks at him. “Oh isn’t he handsome,” she croons. “And being older, he must be wiser and will be so much more patient and kinder with me.” Aggie tends to roll her eyes. Victor? His expression doesn’t change much but if you watch him closely, you’ll realize that his gaze doesn’t miss much.

justin_bartha3Enter Mr. Bartholomew Winston Alexander-Smythe. Mr. Alexander-Smythe is the second son of a minor lord. He’s reading for the law. Or trying to, anyway. London is a place of many temptations. One of them is a rather sweet-faced, brown-haired, brown-eyed girl by the name of Lady Winnifred Phipps. They met at a party and poor Bartee has never been the same. He was smitten. Like a moon-eyed calf he is whenever she enters the room, and half the time when she’s nowhere to be found. He is positive that he can be a be a better husband and is intent on proving that to Winnie….just as soon as he stops walking into doors.

maskim3maksim1And last but not least, we need our slightly nerdy scientist because this is a steampunk novel, right? May I present Lord John Gideon Charles Somerset, the Earl of Glamorgan? Aggie calls him Jack. Sometimes he remembers to answer. He tends to get lost in his experiments. He has a steam-powered gyroflitter (I say, I must have a way to get from the ground to my Zeppelin I’ll have you know.), a clock-work horse (“I forgot to feed the live one,” he mutters looking sheepish and then hastens to add, “though the fellow is doing quite well now with a man up in Shropshire.”) and all manner of interesting machines at his home. Oh, I should mention that Jack is also a vampire. So while he might be a geek, one really doesn’t want to piss him off. Just sayin’…

These would be the characters in the new WIP. I don’t want to reveal too much of the plot. Aggie is the heroine, Jack is her hero and Victor has to be the villain, of course. Bartee is our comic relief and yes there will be zombies. And steampunk. And clockwork figures that go bump in the night. I leave you with one last image. This is what London looked like the night Aggie and Jack met. But tell me? How are your projects going? And what do you think of my new “critters”?
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17 Responses to “NaNo Day Two”
  1. Paula R. says:

    I love it Silver. I love London, the best setting for Literature, for it seems like this is what you book will sort of look like. I love vamps, and I can’t wait to figure out who the “bad” guy really is. I know who you said he was, but I am sure there is room for speculation there. The most innocent looking face, could mask the most despicable soul. Wow, I love that line…can’t believe it came from my head. Can’t wait to read Faerie Fate. Sorry for going off on a tangent there…ahem, like you, I made it through Day 1 of Nano, closing with close to 2K words. I was very excited to have been able to do that, and I felt a sense of euphoria. Now, I know I can, so I have to do it again today.

    Unlike you, I am not sure where the story is going as yet. I have characters, just showing up, and there is no real direction, i.e. plot design, to follow. I am not very good at that. I don’t even have a title yet, but I think that it is shaping up. Remember, this is my first hand at writing full length novels, consistently, so I am just taking it one day at a time. I think I may have an idea of a title around week 2 or 3. Hopefully, a little background excerpt will follow sooner, but I am not going to stress over it. It took me a while to get started, but once I did, I wrote non-stop for about two hours. I felt like I accomplished a great fete. It also made me realize that I really didn’t have anything to worry about. I can do this while working full-time. When I close the doc at the end of the day, I know that I can continue and the ideas will continue to flow. I have to get ready for work now, but I hope you have, and everyone else, have a wonderful day. I will check back in, probably much later, since today is my long day at work.

    Peace and love,
    Paula R.

    • Silver James says:

      Paula, THAT’S what NaNo is all about! It’s permission to just write. Whatever is in your imagination. Find the story there. Put it on paper. Don’t worry where it takes you, just enjoy the journey. I’m so proud of you for starting!

      • Paula R. says:

        Hey Silver, thanks for the encouragement. I need that. I only squeezed out close to 1K today, but I was only working for an hour with interruptions from the boys on dorm…and Castle is one, so I am trying to watch that as I type this right now. It is good. Maybe I will be able to squeeze out a few more words out before I go to bed. I also want to get in some reading as well.

        Peace and love,
        Paula R.

        • Silver James says:

          A thousand words today is a thousand words closer to THE END, Paula. That’s all that matters. Castle is well worth the distraction! Yay for procrastination when its as yummy as Rick Castle! Happy reading and writing!

  2. ev says:

    I don’t write ‘em, I just read ‘em.

    I am not all that into the zombie thing that seems to be taking books over- vamps, weres and any number of things, just not that into the falling apart dead. (Zits just did an entire week of Zombie parents. ew) However, I know that you will do a good job. I just hope the zombies are not romance interests. That is just too gross.

    • Silver James says:

      Nope. I’m not that into zombies, especially not as a love interest! Ick! And these zombies? Think Temple of Doom. Zombies don’t have to be dead. Necessarily. We’ll just have to see how it all works out. :D

  3. Erika says:

    ZOWIE SILVER! I love it! Aggie and the Zombies, I’m so there!

    BTW Jack is smokin’, I’d call him anything as long as he came to it. *grin*

  4. Ban says:

    Sounds fabulous !!! Can’t wait to read some snippets ;)
    Personally, I’m busy with a capital B but I did manage to get last weeks snippet up on BB. My stories are still very much alive in my head – maybe your steampunk scientist can invent a machine that will tap into your head and type out the images one sees in their mind ?!?
    Best of luck with NaNoWriMo – we’re all rooting for you !!!

    • Silver James says:

      Aren’t we all? I always manage to squeeze out at least 50K. These year, I’d love to actually have a complete novel to start editing come December 1.

      And wouldn’t that device be wonderful! Of course, being a vampire, I suspect he can rather read minds a bit. ;)

      Keep writing those snippets. Eventually, you’ll have a novel. It’s amazing how that works.

  5. Liza says:

    Sounds wonderful! Can’t wait to see snippets along the way. BTW, Jack is super hot!!! Good luck Silver.

  6. Kira Daniels says:

    Sounds like a terrific start, Silver! I haven’t written at all since I started working. Bugger and all that! Bleh! But I don’t plan on giving up on it. I just have to restructure my writing time. Know of any good re-structererers??? lol

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